Ref 16 (and many others...check them!) need full formatting
note ref 16, 17, 19, 21, 24, 26, 28, 29, 30, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 38, 44, 46, 48, 56, 61, 62, 64, 65 do not contain Author information and are otherwise formated as correctly as I can tell.
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09:07, 3 April 2008 (UTC)reply
"In 1999, Jackson secretly entered into her second marriage with dancer, songwriter and director René Elizondo; a marriage which remained secret until Elizondo filed for divorce in 2000" - why is this mentioned in the 1986–1992 section?
"Worldwide sales for "Together Again," according to Virgin Records are over 6 million copies, one of the largest selling singles ever from a female artist." - citation needed for all the records presented here
The paragraph that discusses the success of The Velvet Rope needs a lot of reorganising...you keep throwing out random records and stats and it could be placed in a more logical order. (More citing needed for these stats, too)
You might want to avoid using {{main}} and just wlink the stuff in the sections, because it looks really weird at the top of the 2000–2005: All for You and Damita Jo section with all those links there
"It debuted at number one on the Billboard 200 selling 605,128 copies making All For You the biggest first-week sales total of Janet's career and would go on to sell more than three million copies in America." - goes from past to present(ish) tense (needs reword), and needs sourcing.
"at no.13 in February, 1999." - "no" --> "#", and wlink the date (
February 1999)
Done
Again, the 20YO stats could do with more citing
"and the film was released on 12 October 2007. The movie" - film or movie...take your pick, but just use one. You can also throw its name in sometimes to avoid redundancies