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Nominator: Generalissima ( talk · contribs) 02:01, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sohom Datta ( talk · contribs) 14:52, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
This has been around in the backlog long enough, I'll take a stab at this. Sohom ( talk) 14:52, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
600 subscribers-- I don't think subscribers is the right term here.
although it is unknown if White was aware of its separate invention by clockmakers, first attested by Joseph Williamson c. 1720.-- This is a bit hard to parse, what does first attested by mean in the context?
bolstered by cross-Channel transmission-- cross-channel?
possibly indicating his acquaintanceship-- Why possibly?
possibly indicating that his parents were Nonconformists.-- Is this backed up by the source, feels like a bit of a stretch to assume this?
out-flow radial turbineand
single and double helical gearsare not things I can immediately conjur up mental pictures for and it takes me a while to parse/figure out what they are.