The lead is only two sentences long. Add important aspects from his early life, the foundation of the society and the last years. Two - three more sentences ought to do.--
GoPTCN11:01, 14 May 2012 (UTC)reply
Overall: I copyedited the article a bit and linked some uncommon words. Otherwise the article deserves the icon if you expand the section a bit.--
GoPTCN11:01, 14 May 2012 (UTC)reply
Pass/Fail:
I've expanded the lead section. I'm always fearful that I'm including too much once I get started. I believe that I've addressed the concerns expressed above. Thanks! WikipelliTalk18:36, 14 May 2012 (UTC)reply