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06:55, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
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You may link English and Nottinghamshire
"His best year was in 1882,..." no need of "in"
In the article you are saying that his bowling average is 10.95 whereas in the infobox it is 12.48.
Early career
eight wickets and conceded 88 → eight wickets and conceded eighty-eight........... as you have done in the next sentence
twenty eight → twenty-eight
Lancashire professional
Crossland's performances for Enfield ... Whay is Enfield?
....at the Oval.[15] → I think this should be The Oval
...touring Australians,[17] In the ..... In should be in
claiming seven wickets for 72.[20] → "seventy-two" for consistency
Throwing controversies
...he was never no balled by the umpires.[8] → it was never given no ball by the umpires.
...eight for 57... for consistency "fifty-seven"
Termination of county cricket career
he took four for 52 and three for 51 .....→ You are not consistant about numbering throughout the article.
...at Old Trafford. → at the Old Trafford.
Old Trafford is just referred to as such, without the definite article. It would be "the Old Trafford Cricket Ground" though.
Later life and career
...after his explusion.... → "expulsion"
...bowlers came to a close,... no need of "a"
Very smoothly written, I really appreciate your work!
Zia
Khan
06:55, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
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Thank you, as always, for your feedback and review. I think I have dealt with all of your comments, feel free to ping me if I've missed anything. I look forward to any further comments you might provide.
Harrias
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21:45, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
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Why are refs 49 and 51 in Italic
In ref 49, what "(1980) and [1899]" means?
Final review
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It is reasonably well written .
a (prose) : b (
MoS for
lead ,
layout ,
word choice ,
fiction , and
lists ) :
It is factually accurate and
verifiable .
a (references) : b (citations to
reliable sources ) : c (
OR ) :
It is broad in its coverage .
a (major aspects) : b (focused) :
It follows the
neutral point of view policy .
Fair representation without bias :
It is stable .
No edit wars, etc. :
It is illustrated by
images , where possible and appropriate.
a: b:
Conclusion : Promoted to GA status, good work. Keep it up!
Zia
Khan
18:39, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
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Pass/Fail :