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Soman: I am far from expert in en grammar but I feel DYK and the sentence in the article too needs bit improvement in paraphrasing. Sentence in the article says ".. Isaac Musa was listed, .., as 'Dead Perpetrators' by the Liberian Truth and Reconciliation Commission (LTRC), presented by the Commission as 'perpetrators who the LTRC [determined] were responsible for various forms of human rights abuses [...] and war crimes but died before the conclusion of the LTRC.'
Can sentence in the article be rephrased something like, ".. Liberian Truth and Reconciliation Commission (LTRC) declared Isaac Musa among perpetrators who were responsible for various forms of human rights abuses [...] and war crimes but died before the conclusion of the LTRC. .."
Now about DYK, Can we understand why you are using word 'supposed' in ".. among deceased supposed perpetrators .."? I am feeling that word bit awkwardly placed. I have not checked source. Whether commission is not sure of their war crimes? If LTRC is sure and conclusive then word 'supposed' seems unnecessary. If LTRC is not sure then whether word 'likely' or 'most likely' will be better in place of word supposed?
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The problem is that LTRC wasn't conclusive by any means. Effectively Isaac's name was put on a list, but it's not like he was really placed on trial on anything. So adding 'supposed' to the DYK is a safer wording. --
Soman (
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18:14, 14 March 2023 (UTC)reply
Article is new enough and long enough. Lots of sources that I can't check, but [6], [16] and [9] don't appear to contain "Musa". What does source [10] add? [11] appears to not support some of the information in the third section. [12] needs some page numbers, I think. [15]'s Musa seems to be a different individual. The nicknames in the lead need a source. Randomly Googling several sentences yields no plagiarism or copyvio. I'd like to see the text in the source that supports the hook. Which I guess is OK-ish. QPQ is OK.
Jo-Jo Eumerus (
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08:28, 17 April 2023 (UTC)reply
The spelling of his name is not consistent across sources (which happens with various Liberian personalities). [6] used "Isaac Musah". [16] uses "Isaac Saye Mussah". [9] seems to use a combination of "Isaac Musa" per my googling. [10] affirms that Musa was Council of State vice chair, in the government installed on March 7, 1994. What is the fact not supported by [11]? Page numbers for [12] added. The Isaac Musa in [15] is obviously this Isaac Musa ("...Si racconta che il comandante di battaglione Isaac Musa sia stato arrestato e passato davanti alla corte marziale , per aver ucciso un membro della Mansion Guard."). There are two other unrelated mentions of "Musa" in [15] (
Mansa Musa and the word
muse in Italian). No nick-names in lede, just examples of different spellings in the different sources. Hook is supported by passage in Hogan (2021): " Isaac Musa was among the 23 names listed as 'Dead Perpetrators' compiled by the LTRC"/"('The list of 'Dead Perpetrators', represents perpetrators who the LTRC determines were responsible for various forms of human rights abuses ... and war crimes but died before the conclusion of the LTRC')." --
Soman (
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21:20, 17 April 2023 (UTC)reply