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Reviewer: Erachima ( talk · contribs) 05:07, 13 August 2014 (UTC)
Everything checks out here. There are a few niggling copyediting/flow issues in the page, but I ultimately saw only one mistake that would impair reader understanding, which I fixed. The last line of text being its own hanging paragraph should be fixed at some point, but I don't consider it worth holding the thing over. As such, I'm passing the article directly, excellent work. --
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