The plot section is a bit overly long and detailed. Try slimming it down
Reduced to 670 words.
"Kate's marriage, which was first alluded in the season one episode "Outlaws", is meant to be a contrast with her relationship with Sawyer in the realtime events – with Kevin, it is a heartfelt and passionate relationship and Kate tries to get involved but her lifestyle ends up on making the marriage fail, whereas with Sawyer both are afraid of intimacy and connection yet still end up together.[1]" There's quite a lot of "with"s in that sentence
Fixed.
Make sure sentences with quotations end with citations (mostly in reception section)
Is it really necessary? What may seem unreferenced is because the following text is covered by the same source.
Yep, it's still necessary in order to fulfill 2b of the GA criteria. In my GA reviews I require that all quoted sentences have citations directly after the period/stop, even if the same reference is already used in the following sentence.
Ruby2010comment!00:43, 16 August 2011 (UTC)reply