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Hi, I'm Jason, and I'm here on behalf of
IBM as part of my work with Beutler Ink (which I've disclosed at the top of this page as well). As someone with a conflict of interest, I will abstain from directly editing the article and instead, post requests to be reviewed and implemented by volunteers. I recently proposed a new article about
John E. Kelly III, EVP of IBM, which was approved at Articles for Creation earlier this week. In light of the draft acceptance, I am requesting to add relevant information pertaining to Dr. Kelly to the IBM article's History section. As the director of research, Dr. Kelly has played a major role at IBM over the course of his 40-year tenure, but he is not mentioned in the current article. Will an editor please review my proposed language and sourcing below, and implement if appropriate?
InformationWeek described
John E. Kelly III as the "father of Watson" and credited him for encouraging the system to compete against humans on Jeopardy![1] Kelly's book, Smart Machines: IBM's Watson and the Era of Cognitive Computing, notes that cognitive computers like Watson are intended for making sense of big data, or large amounts of text, images and voice files.[2]
IBM was represented by Kelly at a conference on the ethics of artificial intelligence (AI) organized by the Pontifical Academy for Life, where the "Rome Call for AI Ethics" was signed, which advocated for the responsible use of AI technologies.[3][4] Following, Kelly also announced IBM's partnership with the Bambino Gesù Hospital in Vatican City to use Watson to gather data about brain cancer and other diseases.[5]
I see Watson and Jeopardy! are mentioned in the History section already, but I hope editors find this additional context helpful and in line with the other notable people and projects mentioned. The purpose of the second bullet is to demonstrate Watson does more than just compete on television game shows. I understand editors will have the ultimate say in how the proposed text is implemented. I'm also curious if
John E. Kelly III belongs in
Template:IBM.
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MapleSoy: I'm struggling to find someone to review this request. Since you moved the Kelly biography into main space, I wonder if you'd be willing to review this request to add mention of Kelly to this article and possibly
Template:IBM as well. Thanks!
Inkian Jason (
talk)
15:53, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
Since Spintendo is no longer active, requests can linger for up to 2 months in the request queue. Not done, this is a high-level article about the major points of the history of a huge corporation, so we have to move details into related articles where possible. The proposed addition reads like a name-drop. He is not even mentioned in the intro of
Watson (computer).
David Ferrucci is not mentioned in this article. Interested readers can follow the link to the article on Watson. Do take care that future requests satisfy
WP:DUE, an article should not be left with a conspicuous slant in who is named and who is not. – Thjarkur(talk)23:33, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
Why is there no mention of the huge number of employees that were laid off in the early noughties and class suite that went with it. That article looks as though it has been whitewashed. scope_creepTalk17:09, 23 December 2020 (UTC)