According to
WP:SURNAME full names (with rank where applicable) should be mentioned on the first instance of the name only. Afterwards, only the surname (without the rank) should be noted. I noticed this in case of Kleist, Rundstedt, Hube and Guderian, so far, but there may be more of such instances - please check for others.
Those are the most significant issues here, especially referencing. I'll have another read-through of the prose once the references are completed though.--
Tomobe03 (
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12:48, 13 December 2013 (UTC)reply