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00:44, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
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Hi, will review.
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00:44, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
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- In the first caption you may want to clarify whether this is the first or second time Dolly is making landfall, since it made landfall twice.
- "Throughout the Yucatán Peninsula, airports and port were closed"-I assume you meant airports and ports?
- Under the Texas section, United States should be linked and Texas should probably be linked again.
- Shouldn't Belize and the United States be added under the areas affected column in the infobox, since they had also been affected from the storm?
- And just as a note, the first link in the external links section is dead.
Pretty well written, with only the minor points above needing fixing. Will place on hold for seven days.
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03:14, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
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- Very well, will pass article.
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18:52, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
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