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You should probably include the rainfall graphic for Cosme into this article. If you don't know how, I could do it for you. Also, reference 12 was published two months from now? You can't mix different date styles in the reference section...it could be a problem for GA.
Thegreatdr (
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02:12, 1 May 2010 (UTC)reply
weakening into a tropical storm shortly after coming ashore..[2] - two periods
High winds produced by the storm knocked down numerous trees and power lines throughout the affected areas. - instead of "knocked down", maybe use "damaged" or "struck"
The highest rainfall recorded in relation to Cosme was 16.1 in (410 mm) in Yautepec San Bartolo, Mexico - change "Yautepec San Bartolo" to "San Bartolo Yautepec" add link to it.
Many adobe homes were destroyed, but a specific cost of damage is unknown. - change "a" to "the"
flash flood watches and warnings were issued. [7] - still should not be a space between the ref and period.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail: - Pass.
Wow, this is a short, but impressive article. Only a few minor errors that were fixed quickly. Great job finding
sources. I have passed the article. Great job!!
CrowzRSA22:49, 9 May 2010 (UTC)reply