"Operationally the system was not declared a tropical depression until 0600 UTC on August 16 after a reconnaissance mission into the storm found a closed circulation and flight level winds of 37 mph (60 km/h).[2]" comma before the.
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"The storm slowly intensified as convection was displaced from the center of circulation; however, upper-level outflow was well-defined and intensification of the storm was expected as it tracked over the Gulf Stream.[4] " I'd link to
atmospheric circulation inestead of
eye (cyclone))
"Significantly cooler sea surface temperatures in the path of the hurricane resulted in weakening, leading to the eye becoming cloud-filled. Later on August 19, the western portion of the eyewall brushed the eastern tip of Long Island" how cool were the SSTs's? 25C? 26C?
"In the Bay of Fundy, fishermen were urged to return to port in fears of large swells from Hurricane Bob.[20]" can this one-sentence paragraph be combined with anther due to its small size.
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"Before Bob made landfall in New England, it passed directly over Block Island, Rhode Island." wtf is Block Island? Wikilink it please.
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