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Over the past few months, I've been working with Honor to improve the brand article as well as those for specific phone models. On behalf of Honor, I'd like to propose some improvements to the Huawei Honor 9 article, which is currently underdeveloped and inappropriately sourced. The draft I've proposed here very closely resembles the Huawei Honor 8 and Huawei Honor 8 Pro articles, and offers an overview of the model's specifications, release, and reception. Based on the Honor 8 and Honor 8 Pro articles, I've learned what editors expect in a Wikipedia article about a phone, so I'm hoping this draft will be quick and easy to review.
For the "Reception" section, I tried keeping content as neutral as possible by only including ratings and review summaries offered by the authors themselves (as opposed to me cherrypicking from various sources to construct a summary using original wording). Each of these ratings and quotations are easily verifiable, and are usually seen at the very top or bottom of each source. I suppose the quotations could be eliminated altogether, but I think having the short review summaries gives some additional context, so the section is more than just a list of ratings by various sources.
@ Pbsouthwood, Kvng, and Jcc: You three were very helpful with responding to edit requests on the Huawei Honor 8 Pro talk page. I was wondering if you'd consider reviewing this draft and copying over content appropriately. The draft is not very long and should not take much time to review. I also plan to upload an image for the infobox, and can answer any questions here. Thanks again for your consideration and help. Inkian Jason ( talk) 17:28, 17 October 2017 (UTC)
@ D4R1U5: I see you worked on the Huawei Mate 10 article. Do you have any interest in taking a look at my proposed draft for the Huawei Honor 9 article here? I am looking for someone to copy over the proposed markup to replace the existing Honor 9 article appropriately. If you're not interested, I will ping some additional members of technology-related WikiProjects. Thanks for your consideration. Inkian Jason ( talk) 18:37, 28 November 2017 (UTC)
@ D4R1U5: Thank you for your help. I noticed the categories need to be fixed, but hopefully this will be resolved in the process of the history merge. I'll mark this edit request as 'answered' once the banner is removed from the top of the article. Thanks again for reviewing the draft. Inkian Jason ( talk) 16:45, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
I think it is wrong to say "Huawei Honor 9", Honor phones are do not carry the "Huawei" name (even though they are from the same company). It should be just "Honor 9". -- MK ( talk) 06:15, 3 December 2017 (UTC)