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Thank you for this lengthy and interesting article. A few notes:
It is standard to wikilink a term only once in an article, the first time it appears.
It is cleaner, and neater, to relink to the same reference by using <ref name=X> blah blah blah</ref> and then citing <ref name=X/> later. This way, all the reference links point to the same footnote, rather than appearing as separate footnotes with the same name.
Your facts and details are great, but the language needs to be cleaned up considerably. Many phrases are not full sentences and thus do not have meaning. Also, very little context is given for the connection between statements.