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Reviewer: SuperHamster ( talk · contribs) 00:44, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
@ Silver seren: I'll be glad to review this (and this will be my first GA review) - quite the interesting game! ~ Super Hamster Talk Contribs 00:44, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
@ Silver seren: I know this game is currently listed in the Humble Bundle, and has got some coverage (particularly with their...interesting...pillow case) if that's worth investigating for sources and updating the article with. ~ Super Hamster Talk Contribs 00:44, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
I have tagged File:Hatoful Boyfriend screenshot.png for automatic size reduction by a bot. ~ Super Hamster Talk Contribs 04:12, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
The gameplay section mentions characters not yet introduced in the article (such as when explaining additions to later versions of the game, or specifying characters needed to trigger certain things). I think this is both confusing (coming before the characters' introduction section) and unnecessary detailing for a gameplay description. ~ Super Hamster Talk Contribs 04:12, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
The Bad Boys Love plot summary is in-depth and well-written, but it's a bit too detailed and lengthy for the article. Would be worth looking into and trimming excessive details whenever possible. ~ Super Hamster Talk Contribs 04:12, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
The sequel, HolidayStar, is covered in the lead, but only has a couple mentions scattered through the rest of the article - the sequel should ideally be covered in the body, too. ~ Super Hamster Talk Contribs 23:53, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
As for Bad Boys Love, i'm not sure how it can be trimmed that much. It is basically the entire plot and has to weave in the backstories of about 10 characters from all of their routes. Silver seren C 02:05, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
@ Silver seren: I noticed that File:Hatoful_Boyfriend_screenshot.png is from the older version of the game; I imagine a screenshot of the remake would be more appropriate? I've got a screenshot of the same scene from the newer edition ready to upload if you agree. ~ Super Hamster Talk Contribs 19:45, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
✓ Pass: Everything looks good to me, very impressed with the depth of the article and all the requirements seem to be met. Thanks for the nomination and the work you've put into it (along with anyone else who might be reading this, who has worked on the article). Cheers, ~ Super Hamster Talk Contribs 21:32, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
"Yuuya explains that the protagonist's body had been gathered in the chemistry lab." What does this mean? How can a single body be "gathered"? Should it say "found"? Equinox ( talk) 16:46, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
Character list is unsourced and not independently notable from the main series entry. Perhaps a few things should be merged (if necessary) but the rest of it is primary source stuff outside the scope of a generalist encyclopedia such as ours. Plus this main article is GA-rated so it sufficiently covers the series characters as necessary in the dedicated section. czar 02:09, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
or, we could source it instead, since it's a detailed, accurate article from my knowledge, and it isn't just filling space Aleccat ( talk) 22:53, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
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