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Remove the red links for "Nunca es Suficiente" and "Lo Que Construimos"
Lead
Paragraph 1
State that "Down to the Root" in English, like "(English: Down to the Root)"
Add ", recorded for her studio album, Hasta la Raíz (2015)."
Paragraph 2
Expand this paragraph
Background
The first sentence is kind of long, but I don't really see how you could shorten it
Remove '(Mexico)'; it's not necessary in the context
Change 'seven' to 'six' years
Writing and recording
Paragraph 1
Link 'Mexico'
The sentence that starts with "While recording demos..." is too long and includes too many clauses
Paragraph 2
The lead sentence could be shortened; you don't have to include how they became friends during the recording process
Add an author to the Billboard source if available
Critical and commercial reception
Separate these into two separate paragraphs; one for critical reception and another for commercial reception
Paragraph 1
Change the lead sentence to "Upon its release, "Hasta la Raíz" received positive reviews from music critics."
Change 'coincident' to 'in agreement'
Paragraph 2
Remove the link to "Nunca Es Suficiente"
Move each source in the second sentence to its respective statement (after each comma)
Music video
Try adding a photo of the music video
Perhaps, add a small description of the music video as well
Track listing
Remove the 'Writer(s)' and 'Producer(s)' section in the track listing; you've already labeled this information in the infobox above
Credits and personnel
Remove the ';' from each credit
Use proper n dashes instead of hyphens
References
[6] - Link iTunes store
[8] - Link Discogs
[12] - Link Billboard
[13] - Use a proper n dash
[13] - Link Spotify
[14] - Remove one of the 'Coffee and Saturday' inclusions
[16] - Use a proper n dash
[19] - Use a proper n dash
[20] - Use a proper n dash
[21] - Use a proper n dash
[22] - Use a proper n dash
[27] - Link Sony Music
End of GA Review:
Another good article, but definitely needs some work before passing GA status. I will put the article on hold until problems and addressed and corrections are made. Thanks,
Carbrera (
talk)
21:27, 5 March 2016 (UTC).reply
"received positive reviews from music critics and peaked at number 17... and number five..." → "received positive reviews from music critics. The song was also commercially successful, peaking at number 17... and number five..."
Overall, a very good article. Most of these comments are regarding tense/grammar. Once fixed, the article will surely pass. Thanks again!
Carbrera (
talk)
22:40, 31 March 2016 (UTC)reply
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