From a quick look, I see some aspects of the history missing, and way too much emphasis on Elizabeth Colt and the Colt family for some reason. Will work on those areas when I get a chance.
Trainsandotherthings (
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03:56, 17 February 2022 (UTC)reply
1. Well written?: The prose needs to be polished, with informal language such as "gotten" and "like" used too often. Weasel words such as "vibrant" are also used several times and need to be cleaned up to comply with NPOV. The Points of interest section is tagged with needing conversion to prose, which I agree with; in its current state, it's long and not particularly interesting due to the loose selection criteria.
2. Verifiable?: Many sections are lacking suitable citations, especially parts of the pre-20th century history, the Sports table, and Government.
3. Broad in coverage?: Coverage of parks, media, and arts leave much to be desired, while there's overemphasis on emergency services and recent developments.
4. Neutral point of view?: Seem to be promotional at times, especially in the "Recent developments" section that uses booster-ish language. Other issues include the Government section, which seems to praise mayor Perez ("widely credited", with only one citation) and does not present a balanced view of the government system.
5. Stable?: Pass
6. Images?: Fire stations gallery has to go, as well as the mismash in the Points of interest.
The article has improved slightly since the nomination was opened (mainly with the removal of undue coverage in the History section), but has a long way to go before it's ready for another attempt.