I like this character (probably influenced by my fondness of the actress!). I won't be able to get to this until Friday or Saturday (at the earliest) though. Ruby2010/201315:43, 17 October 2012 (UTC)reply
GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)
Perhaps mention the years she was in the series earlier in the lead?
introduces, a running joke - unnecessary comma
Despite being introduced as fair minded and hard working, the character - make clear you're talking about Harriet here
is killed off in the penultimate episode of the - link of this episode?
Make sure direct quotes are immediately followed by citations
No need to link Eccleston more than once in article body
I got to sacrifice myself to save the world." [8] - unnecessary space
Collinson "[couldn't] bear the thought she's dead" - did he actually say that, or is that what someone else attributed to him?
death and Davies stated - add comma after death
Use single quote marks within quotations (" vs. ')
I assume Davies intended for Harriet to reflect Margaret Thatcher (what with the Doctor's "looking old" line); perhaps add something about this to the production section? Currently all that is said about it is what critics are reading into it
My Comments -- Oh I loved the ending where she blew up that ship! Spot-on as you Brits like to say! I didn't think the story was a anti-war message, I thought it was right down the middle. Both reasonable sides (Hawk/Dove) were presented and for the record, I would have done exactly the same thing. It was also a good way to introduction Torchwood. It is a shame that Torchwood was so violent. Torchwood was a great idea but to much blood was spilled. --
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19:40, 4 July 2014 (UTC)reply
Seems comprehensive and no issues on images. Well done with the prose, just a few minor nitpicks above. I'll place the review on hold for seven days. Nice work! Ruby2010/201322:17, 21 October 2012 (UTC)reply