File:HMS Niord.jpg has no US PD and not currently sure about the existing Swedish rationale as no publishing date is provided for the "published anonymously before 1 January 1954" rationale.
Updated the source and licenses.
Article is stable
Earwig reports copyvio unlikely
Lede and infobox
First class needs a hyphen
Added.
"However, this service did not last long." I would consider 4-5 years of service to be enough that this sentence isn't needed
Removed.
Main text could more explicitly explain the namesake (to avoid needing an infobox citation)
Added.
Should the infobox have the design speed instead of the trials speed?
Good point. Changed.
Complement differs between infobox and main text
Oops. Amended.
Design and development
Why/how was Oden successful? First sentence of the first paragraph is tipping the reader straight into the deep end!
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Pickersgill-Cunliffe: Not a problem. Very kindly, Sturmvogel 66 has already had a look through and provided very helpful suggestions, which have already been acted on. Please look at my comments above. I believe all the changes you request are done.
simongraham (
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17:42, 16 April 2024 (UTC)reply