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Why is quote marks used around pom pom in the infobox but not in the text?
Different sources have both, but I have changed the text for consistency.
Construction
...the 1912–1913 Programme...: probably need more context for the Programme
Done.
River Clyde mentioned here, but Clydebank in the infobox.
Reference to Clydebank removed as unnecessary.
Originally laid down as Picton, Llewellyn was renamed... since you have already established the original in the previous sentence, perhaps reword. May be: "The ship was renamed Llewellyn by Admiralty order on 30 September 1913,..."
Done
...the first alphabetical class of the Navy... perhaps a bit more context here? I've read a few RN ship articles but this is the first I've heard of the alphabetical class.
Clarified and expanded.
On theThe following day...
Done.
After returning to service,.... This implies she may have been damaged or refitted?
Clarified.
escortinged troop convoys to France
Done.
one of which struck the destroyer. need to mention that the bow was damaged as mentioned in the lead.
Done
without additional casualties. this would imply some casualties due to the torpedo strike?