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Quality of the information: 2 Good time range of sources
Article size: 2 (15,334 bytes)
Readability: 1 More links would be helpful, some sentence structures could be improved for clarity but overall good "
References: 2 More citations in the Role in Pain System and Lateral Grey Column sections would be helpful.
Links: 2 Could add more but sufficient linking and a red link Haptic" and "nociceptive" can be linked. "Analgesics" can also be linked.
Responsive to Comments: 2 no comments so no need for response
Formatting: 2 Formatting is a little confusing more of an intro about the three separate types may help to orient the reader. Pictures/diagrams would be extremely helpful
Writing: 1 Capitalize Laminae in the sentence "laminae III and IV....". The article switches between the European spelling "grey" and the American spelling "gray".
Used Real Name: 2
Is Outstanding in some way: 1 Good article but not outstanding
Thank you for the feedback Jessica. I standardized the page to only use one spelling of "grey". I will also add those links you suggested.
Bsridhar6 (
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01:40, 27 November 2013 (UTC)reply
Quality of Information: 2
Article size: 2
Readability: 1 Strong use of hyperlinks, but wording is sometimes confusing and article may not be understood completely by the average reader.
Refs: 2
Links: 2 Strong use of links to other Wikipedia articles throughout.
Responsive to comments: 2 No comments
Formatting: 2 Good organization of sub-sections.
Writing: 2 Some awkward sentence structure, but overall the article is well written and consistent.
Used real name or has real name on User TALK page: 2
Outstanding?: 1 Only slightly over 15,000 Bytes and only obvious portions of the topic are discussed. Also, there are no figures or pictures to increase understanding.
Thank you for the feedback and link to the MOS, Tryptofish. I changed the sections headers to sentence case as listed in the link you provided.
Bsridhar6 (
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01:36, 27 November 2013 (UTC)reply