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The way this article was written sounds like it was by a member of Globaloria or the World Wide Workshop people.
It uses the word "student" in the article more than what would be exactly needed in it.
I suggest it be written to not include such words as "innovative" (and/or variations thereof) or "immersive".
There is also no need for the tagline of one of the members either, as that itself makes it seem if it was written by a member of their staff.
I'm working on this in conjunction with cleaning up the article about the CEO, since there's a lot of unnecessary cross-pollenation. Will be cleaning up the biased, self-promoting language in addition to the tightening up.
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