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You kind of already addressed most of what I immediately thought. I'd consider dropping the subheadings for each individual year, and just combing them into the respective team subheadings; that level of division is a little excessive. May be good to limit the playoff scores and so on as well, yes. I wouldn't bother with so much details on the player results for each season; that is more relevant for the respective players and/or teams, not Burnett himself. For notable players, it could maybe be something to add in its own section, like players he coached drafted, but it could also be left out. And for myself personally, I'm not fond of overusing sites like hockeydb or eliteprospects for references for things, but that is more a personal preference thing and not really a detriment. Otherwise it's not a bad article, quite impressive for a junior/minor league coach.
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