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I asked User:DannyMusicEditor for help with this parameter since I was having trouble trying to come up with a good description. Hope his description is appropriate for you.
Yeepsi (
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21:39, 7 October 2016 (UTC)reply
Done
Lead
is an EP by English rock band Basement → is an EP recorded by English rock band Basement
second album Colourmeinkindness. → date of the release
In July, the Further Sky EP was released → In 28 July, 2014 the Further Sky EP was released
to positive reviews. → and met positive reviews.
This section is quite weak, you need to add some opinion from the reviewers, generalize it. Style of the EP, availability for streaming three days before
After that perhaps two paragraphs?
Done
Background
because of personal commitments → due to personal commitments
The band explained that they had thought the hiatus... → The band thought the hiatus...
Done
Composition and recording
Basement came together to practice while Henery was home for Christmas in 2013.The practice was initially "just [...] for fun". Although the band had ideas, composing material was accidental according to Henery → so was he at home for Christmas or not? This sentence is a huge mess.
Content with the song, it was recorded with an iPhone. → who was? who recorded it? The entire song or just the raw part of it?
While Henery resided in the US, the rest of the band had composed "Summer's Colour" → While Henery was residing in the US, the rest of the band had composed "Summer's Colour" → where?
You should had rock to the genre section in the infobox as well.
hints → influences
but not far removed from Colourmeinkindness → but not far from Colourmeinkindness
Done
Release
announced for release → announced as the band's next project to be released.
and "Summer's Colour" → and the track "Summer's Colour"
The band toured Australia, and Japan, and at sold out American venues between 26 July and 20 August → Basement toured between 26 July and 20 August in Australia, Japan, and sold out American venues.
the band → Basement
with support from Cloakroom → with Cloakroom and Newmoon as the opening act. (not sure if this is right?)
Done
Reception
Remove the alternative press score of the board, seems bias.
So whats the conclusion were the reviews favorable or not?
He described → LaGambina described
thought the songs were "well put together" → what do you mean?
His only criticism of the EP was that the percussion sounded "a bit cymbal heavy." → The only criticism the reviewer appointed to the EP was the percussion which sounded "a bit cymbal heavy."
thought that the EP → thought the EP
Is Punknews.org a reliable source? I mean look at the name of the reviewer.
I've done almost every point, apart from the Track listing points and the dead links (I'll fix the links tomorrow since archive.org isn't working for me at the moment).
Yeepsi (
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21:39, 7 October 2016 (UTC)reply