 | Funeral for Yesterday is currently an Albums good article nominee. Nominated by Chchcheckit ( talk) at 12:20, 12 April 2024 (UTC) An editor has placed this article on hold to allow improvements to be made to satisfy the good article criteria. Recommendations have been left on the review page, and editors have seven days to address these issues. Improvements made in this period will influence the reviewer's decision whether or not to list the article as a good article.
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Chchcheckit, if you're planning to change the article, it would be best to remove the nomination and nominate it again when you're ready. The "onhold" status is only for when the article is under review and the reviewer wants to place it on hold. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 17:30, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
- remind me how
Chchcheckit (
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17:31, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
- Looks like you figured it out. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 17:35, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
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Nominator: Chchcheckit ( talk · contribs) 12:20, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Cambalachero ( talk · contribs) 19:56, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- thank you so much for doing this working on this has taken way too long ea dgcfdtbhvbr i very much appreciate this!!! enjoy reviewing
Chchcheckit (
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20:37, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- also; if you need to check the text sources i.e. metal edge (paccioco 2007) and brave words bloody knuckles (begai 2007a and 2007b) i will type out stuff Chchcheckit ( talk) 20:42, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Image review
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File:Kittie Funeral For Yesterday.jpg
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File:Aerial view of Red Bank.jpg
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File:Morgan Lander of Kittie.jpg
- Infobox and lead
- Two chronology sections in the infobox?
- rationale added and extra chronology removed Chchcheckit ( talk) 23:37, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Background
- "Artemis did not support the band financially during their tours in support of the album..." You said "support" twice, try to reword that.
- the disagreement about the breakup mentioned in the note may be worth to include in visible text rather than a footnote
- "...which allowed the band to "test drive" their new songs..." try to avoid using idioms such as "test drive"
- Recording and production
- "... the longest time Kittie has spent recording any of their albums" Any of the albums up to that date, or ever? The reference seems to be from the year of the album's release.
- Composition and lyrics
- Seems fine
,Promotion
- "...an "unofficial" music video for the song was released three days later". How can a video released by the band be unofficial?
- Touring
- "Kittie intended on touring the United Kingdom supporting Cradle of Filth in April 2007, but pulled out as their record label would not give them any touring support" Their record label? Wasn't that X of Infamy, an indie label belonging to them? Isn't the point of having such a label to avoid exactly this kind of situations?
- Critical reception
- Seems fine
I think that's all for now. Cambalachero ( talk) 03:18, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
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