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Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for this article. I think it's a good addition but it needs some context for a general audience. Related, while the journal sources are generally better, if there's a reliable layperson-friendly source you can add as a reference or as "Further reading" it might also provide less familiar readers more information.

siro χ o 07:45, 25 October 2023 (UTC) reply