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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 15:14, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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wrote in selected Provo athlete of the year-> "selecting"
ultimately committed to the University of Washington. He majored in advertising at the school-> "Washington, where he majored in advertising."
before he was called to serve in World War II.was he drafted? Or is this a colloquialism? Either way, make it more objective ("before serving in World War II" or something like that)
He served in the Battle of the Bulge and parachuted as part of the Normandy landings and was awarded two Purple Hearts after having been wounded in servicereplace the first "and" with a comma.
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:52, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29
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Improved to Good Article status by BeanieFan11 ( talk). Self-nominated at 21:12, 25 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Fred Provo; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.