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In the first line the citation should be placed after the bracket not before, per the MOS
Maybe a word introducing Calder despite the wikilink (like you have done for Villanueva) would be reader-friendly, they won't have to click a link to get an idea about them
I am not sure about this; should the country not be mentioned?
The lead could use a few more sentences to summarize all major aspects of the article. Though within a third of the length of the main text. For example Villanueva is missing in the lead.
You don't need to add citations in the lead unless the fact is excluded from the main text for some reason
The lead needs to be elongated to add more aspects of the article.. see
WP:MOSLEAD. Villanueva was just an instance.
Added a paragraph with some stuff from the other sections, besides this I'm not sure that anything really qualifies for the lead - it's not a long article, the specifics don't need mentioning, not many features get such in-depth coverage that a lead mention is warranted. Do you see anything else within the main body you think should be in the lead?
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University City of Caracas should be wikilinked, it's the first mention in the main text. Please check for any other instances
Villanueva hired many artists from around the world to contribute works to the campus, including Calder As it is his first mention in the main text, introduce him like you introduce Villanueva
Convert templates typically go from US to metric, here it is the other way round. Use the "order=flip" parameter in convert templates.
Thirty-one clouds create the artwork, with 22 on the ceiling, 5 on the right side wall and 4 on the left side wall Generally numbers less than ten should be in words, and above should be in digits
Looks good, but you missed the area template which needs a swap too. Not sure about the tons, you can check the convert template options. By the way should we use decimals instead of fractions? And should it not be 13 "millimetres"? Consider using "|abbr=on".