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SounderBruce: I hate to sound impatient, but what is supposed to be a week-long process has taken over three months. If you don't have time to review the article, can we have a different reviewer? --
Jordano53 (
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15:14, 21 August 2020 (UTC)reply
Jordano53, I still plan on reviewing when I have time (which is limited due to the pandemic). GAN is usually under a long backlog for reviews and there is no expectation of a review taking just a week. SounderBruce20:43, 21 August 2020 (UTC)reply
I feel the sentence The eagle is grasping on to a single yellow star, which, with the 16 stars, represents Ohio as the seventeenth state to join the Union. could be more explicit that the eagle's star is in addition to the 16, and mention where the eagle holds the star. Also, it would be "grasping onto" if that phrasing is kept.
The full name of the North American Vexillological Association should be mentioned at the first NAVA instance, earlier in the paragraph.
Probably separate the NAVA flag from the "rediscovery" of the city flag.
I'd mention efforts to remove Columbus references in its own section, though just expanding on this in the Proposed redesign section would probably be adequate.
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Kingsif: Thanks for the review! I've implemented the suggested changes. I've kept the last image to show an example of use within the city and instead chose to remove the image of the NAVA flag. I do not believe it is important enough to use and the last image is, in my opinion, a good example of how the flag is used within the city. Again, thank you.
Jordano53 (
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20:47, 16 October 2020 (UTC)reply
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