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Sandbox edits for proposed page improvements

Beyond My Ken, given your recent reverts of edits I conducted on this page (and Enrique's Journey, please see that Talk page as well), I have elected to begin a civil yet thorough discussion of some (in my view) obvious edits that could be made to both pages that would both bring the page up to better MOS standards (which I understand may not particularly interest you, fair enough) but would also improve the page itself.

Please see my sandbox for Facing History and Ourselves. I believe these edits address a number of problems with the page, namely an over-reliance on primary sources, other sourcing issues (I actually had to remove a number of sources just to get my sandbox to save because it thought a number of the existing sources were proxies), and general content edits that improve the flow and readability of the page (just in my opinion perhaps).

I hope that we can have a productive dialogue concerning this page and collaborate on the highest quality version we can attain (oh and if anyone else would care to chime in, please do!). Central Midfielder ( talk) 17:24, 23 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Discussion needs to take place here, not in your sandbox. Beyond My Ken ( talk) 18:35, 23 December 2020 (UTC) reply