From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Article (
|
visual edit |
history ) ·
Article talk (
|
history ) ·
Watch
Reviewer:
Carbrera (
talk ·
contribs )
04:07, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
Add information about his photo in the "alt" parameter please
Done
CorporateM (
Talk )
23:54, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
Remove the parameters not being used:
"Image caption"
"Other names"
Keep the death date and place for now
Done
CorporateM (
Talk )
23:44, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
A better link for the "nationality" parameter would probably be the article for "Russians", yes?
Done
CorporateM (
Talk )
23:44, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
Add a comma in between "In 1994" and "Hamburg University in Germany..." please
Done
CorporateM (
Talk )
23:45, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
Move Ref. 21 to after this sentence: "From 1998 to 2000, its annual revenue grew 280 percent and by 2000 almost sixty percent of revenues were international." instead of its current placement after "Kaspersky's company grew quickly in the late 1990s." please
Done
CorporateM (
Talk )
23:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
I think I would add "of the Kaspersky Lab" after "Kaspersky became CEO"; I don't know, it sounds more clear and exact this way
Done
CorporateM (
Talk )
23:48, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
Alleged affiliations with Russia
Remove the red link to "Sofacy" please
Done
CorporateM (
Talk )
23:49, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
The last two statements sound more like afterthoughts and are awkwardly placed
Are you suggesting a trim or moving it somewhere else?
CorporateM (
Talk )
23:51, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
To be honest, I don't know what could be done with them. There's no better place for them but there, so it's fine.
Carbrera (
talk )
16:29, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
Ref. 14 - De-capitalize "WIRED"
Done
CorporateM (
Talk )
23:53, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
A very good article, with just a few changes; in fact, probably the least amount of changes I've ever suggested. Good work! On hold for seven days; cheers,
Carbrera (
talk )
19:22, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
reply
Passing. Thanks for your quick responses! Cheers,
Carbrera (
talk )
16:29, 10 June 2016 (UTC) .
reply