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I removed
when my effort to clean it up revealed that the link functions as www.modernfeed.com would. The video was probably taken down bcz of copyvio. (I removed some previously harmless but unneeded newlines to unbreak the formatting of the indented version on this talk page.)
Its first use was redundant, since it was part of the overkill (and probably
OR) re others citing him. Its second use was immediately following (my rewording:) "He has twice shared a Pulitzer Prize[....]" It may be worth checking whether the other citation there is adequate.
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Jerzy•
t
11:08, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
I found
For more now on the overhaul of the Bush administration's running of Iraq, we turn to two New York Times reporters: David Sanger covers the White House and Eric Schmitt covers the Pentagon. Welcome to you both. David, what is the again genesis of this overhaul?</ref>
(Again, as in the preceding
#Charlie Rose ref section, i removed a previously harmless newline.) I removed the silly quote "For more now on the overhaul of the Bush administration's running of Iraq, we turn to two New York Times reporters: David Sanger covers the White House and Eric Schmitt covers the Pentagon. Welcome to you both. David, what is the again genesis of this overhaul?", which merely gilds the lily. They had him on; no need to give us the quote to demonstrate explicitly what a glance at the linked page surely shows: that he was on.
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Jerzy•
t
11:08, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
That is the heading i retrofitted. My work on that section was pretty much a matter of style (described above) but i have two related concerns, both major: