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I don't like these "claiming" GA reviews. It's kind of gaming the system. If you don't have time to review the article, then you shouldn't claim it. I'm calling out
User:Yellow Evan - sorry, but the suspense is too much for the person nominating the GAN! :P ♫
Hurricanehink (
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21:51, 11 March 2019 (UTC)reply
Review
Overall, this article is in decent shape. I have made some suggestions for improvement below. I completed the review less than a day after claiming it :P
NoahTalk00:48, 12 March 2019 (UTC)reply
"A police lieutenant took his life after working for nearly 48 hours coordinating floodwater rescues" could be shortened to 'A police lieutenant took his life after coordinating floodwater rescues for nearly 48 hours'
Can I ask why? Wikilinks are most useful when they serve a purpose to a reader. By the time they get to the impact section, I don't want the readers to accidentally click on a marginally-related link. Sure, the effects were in New Jersey, but IDK, linking again here feels like overlinking. ♫
Hurricanehink (
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18:11, 12 March 2019 (UTC)reply
"The peak statewide precipitation during Floyd 14.13 in (359 mm) in Little Falls" Add 'was'
"The worst flooding damage occurred in Somerset County, where the floods isolated several townships, destroyed and damaged 75% of the bridges." this sentence needs some work.
"A police lieutenant in Cranford in Union County took his life after working for nearly 48 hours coordinating floodwater rescues" virtually the same fix here as in the lead.
"sued the borough in 2004 due to the housing policy, which resulted in a change in the borough's housing policy." I don't like having borough and housing policy mentioned twice in the same sentence.