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I have no idea how to change the page back to what it was on November 13th, 2007, but the editing on November 16th is just changing words like "profitable" to "unprofitable", "licensed" to "unlicensed", etc. Someone needs to go in and change the article back to it's November 13th, 2007 form.
Balance
When did Wikipedia turn into an internal Edward Jones PR department site? Take off the bad stuff, and fill in with a whitewash of corporate fluff. Nice. —Preceding
unsigned comment added by
72.85.175.15 (
talk)
21:04, 5 March 2008 (UTC)reply
"Edward Jones financial advisors sell commission-based and fee-based financial products. Offices are usually staffed by two associates: one Financial Advisor (see Financial Adviser, a licensed broker)"
In reply to him/her, I hope my opinions are helpful:
You can't post your personal allegation against the brokerage at Wikipedia.
I am just an editor like you - I personally don't see any problem adding a mention of the settlement, as long as you (a) put the range allegations in perspective, rather than emphasize fraud and (b) mention that EDJ denies wrongdoing.
I agree with you that the article as it is now puts
undue weight on awards and trade press rankings. Everyone has rankings and unfortunately this article only lists the good ones.
Keep it or take it out. I'm indifferent. (Although if in, those bullets have to go.) But if you take it out, I don't think it's worth the time to make some general rule about removing such sections. I personally don't like these kind of sections in general, as they are by their nature hype-ish. But they are also kinda sorta encyclopedia-like--awards are the kind of thing not uncommonly found in print encyclopedias from way back. My big concern in company articles (I do a lot of housekeeping on them) is their thinness. They are important to the world's current ruling structure and need the kind of centrally-located basic info that Wikipedia provides. But they tend to get far less coverage than say that actor who was in two early episodes of Star Trek etc. gets. The important thing IMO--and it does not seem to be a problem in this article--is to put an end to the censoring of criticisms or even outright proven infractions of companies.
Doprendek (
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19:30, 6 June 2018 (UTC)reply
@
Doprendek: I completely agree that the "awards" sub-section on awards could be much more neatly summarized with prose. And I agree that business articles in general could use much more detail, should never be censored to exclude facts critical of the company. In dealing with this issue, I am unclear what about the whole article Nouill beileves is promotional, and how the awards sub-section is itself promotional if the awards are relevant and noteworthy. Hence the discussion here.
Dbsseven (
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22:26, 6 June 2018 (UTC)reply
I agree with Dbsseven's [next to] last sentence, though I did just change a "Cite news" reference to a more appropriate "Cite press release". —
DocWatson42 (
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06:56, 21 June 2018 (UTC)reply
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edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.
Hello, I am disclosed editor, Julia, working for Edward Jones Investments. I am calling on
AllegedlyHuman directly so that together we can work to remove the "undue weight" tag that he applied to the page in January 2021. I have carefully looked over the page, and believe I have identified several places where the removal of unnecessary details, as well as the addition of updated information, will bring better balance to the page. I hope you agree that the following edit requests will restore the necessary balance allowing the "undue tag" to be removed.
In the third paragraph of the History section which begins "On December 22, 2004," please change "As part of the settlement," until "from these product partners" to the following: "The company paid a $75 million fine and disclosed the revenue sharing payments on its website."
In the next (fourth) paragraph, please change: "because, according to the SEC: 'Edward Jones undermined the integrity of the bond underwriting process by overcharging retail customers by at least $4.6 million" to "for overcharging retail customers".
The following (fifth) paragraph describes trivial donations that do not add anything to the understanding of the history of the company, so it should be taken out.
Please add the following paragraph and source to the end of the History section: "At the end of the first quarter of 2021 the company had 18,967 advisors, a decrease of a bit less than 1% since the same time in 2020 when there were 19,027 advisors. The average growth from year to year is about 6%. The decrease was mainly a consequence of the COVID-19 pandemic which reduced hiring.[1]
In the Awards and rankings section add the following to the end of the first paragraph: J.D. Power's 2021 US Full-Service Investor Satisfaction Study ranked Edward Jones highest in investor satisfaction.[2][3]
Add the following to the end of the second paragraph: In 2021 the company was named "one of the 100 Best Companies to Work for" in 2021, for the 22nd time, ranking number 20.[4]
Hi
AllegedlyHuman. Thanks for having this discussion with me. I apologize for not getting the formatting of my edit request correct the first few times, and I thank you for overlooking that and addressing my request anyway. I also apologize for the length of the request, and hope you can overlook that as well. First, I accept your opinion that the political donations are not trivial, and therefore do belong in the article. Second, I can address your concern that some of the sources are hyper-local. The Murray Ledger, can be replaced with a more widely-read source,
https://fortune.com/company/jones-financial/best-companies/ and the Door County Pulse and the Gazette Virginian can both be replaced with
https://www.barrons.com/articles/edward-jones-tops-j-d-powers-ranking-amid-shifting-client-preferences-51618489455. Third, my other edit requests focus on eliminating the "slant towards negative content" that you pointed out and which is the reason for the tag. I am hoping, as I stated above, that we can work together to bring better balance to the article, and if you can try and address the problem of the negative imbalance, I would really appreciate it. Thanks again.
Julia.edwardjones (
talk)
18:46, 26 July 2021 (UTC)reply
NOTE: I’m proposing the following edits for
FleishmanHillard on behalf of
Edward Jones Investments. I’m a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. Please let me know of any questions as you review. Thanks for your time and consideration.
Edit request 24-OCT-2023
Infobox
Please update the following sections to reflect the most recent figures/years available:
Third sentence: Please update to read (changes in bold):
The company currently has relationships with more than 8 million clients and $1.8 trillion in assets under management worldwide.[5][6]
Fourth sentence: Please remove the word “small” from “small business owners” as the company does not solely specialize in servicing small businesses.[7]
History
Third sentence: Please update to read as follows to account for the fact that the company also operates in metros throughout US and Canada (proposed new copy in bold):
Edward Jones’ son Edward D. “Ted” Jones was responsible for the creation of the individual branch network, which has spread across rural communities, suburbs and metro cities throughout the US and Canada.[8][9]
Final paragraph: To bring current and move away from 2020 and 2021 figures, please update this paragraph to read as follows. (Conversely, adding this sentence to the end of the existing paragraph may also be an option, if preferred):
The company had 18,796 advisors on staff at the end of 2022.[10]
Business Model
Please add the following sentence after the current fourth sentence:
In 2022, the company launched a teaming program that allowed multiple branches to service clients, a pivot away from the company’s long-standing model of directing clients to a single branch office.[11]
Final sentence: Please revise the final sentence in this section to the following sentence to bring the figures current and remove “as of 2017”:
Edward Jones has the largest number of brokers, with 18,892, and branch offices, with more than 15,000, among brokerage firms in the United States.[12][13]
Awards and rankings
Please add the following sentence to the end of this section to provide more up to date information on the company’s inclusion in Fortune’s list of Top 100 Companies to Work For:
The company was ranked 35th and 62nd in 2022 and 2023, respectively.[14][15]
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones' 10-Q report showed it finished the second quarter with $1.8 trillion in client assets under its care, a 14% increase compared to the end of the second quarter of 2022.
^FORM 10-K (Report).
U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. February 24, 2023. p. 30. Retrieved October 24, 2023. As of December 31, 2022, the Partnership had approximately 52,000 full-time and part-time employees and partners, including its financial advisors.
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. "Edward Jones offers flexibility and choice for our branch teams to grow our impact and create new value for the 8 million clients we currently serve and the 42 million serious, long-term individual investors we seek to serve," Don Aven, principal for branch and region development at Edward Jones, said in a statement.
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones' 10-Q report showed it finished the second quarter with $1.8 trillion in client assets under its care, a 14% increase compared to the end of the second quarter of 2022...
^O’Hara, Clare (August 27, 2023).
"Edward Jones moves into downtown cores as it expands beyond traditional one-person locations in strip malls".
The Globe and Mail. Retrieved October 24, 2023. For the privately owned subsidiary of U.S. investment giant Edward D. Jones & Co., the shift in business strategy is a huge leap from the traditional one-person adviser storefront office that can be found in hundreds of strip malls across Canada. The Canadian headquarters are in Mississauga, more than 30 kilometres west of Toronto's downtown core.
^"Jones Financial (Edward Jones)".
Fortune. June 5, 2023. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Founded in 1922 by its eponymous founder, the brokerage firm now counts 14,200 branches in all 50 U.S. states, unified by a company-wide training program that its advisors—who come from a range of career backgrounds, from engineering to education to banking—must complete.
^FORM 10-K (Report).
U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. February 24, 2023. p. 11. Retrieved October 24, 2023. The Partnership has continued executing its strategy to grow and promote branch team success during 2022, ending the year with 18,796 financial advisors in two thirds of U.S. counties and all Canadian provinces, a slight decrease from 2021.
^Britton, Diana (July 20, 2023).
"Edward Jones Moves More Advisors to Teams". Wealth Management. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones has a long history of operating under a one-advisor-per-branch model. But about a year ago, the firm said it would let advisors co-locate in the same building if they chose to. The firm has since expanded the team-based approach: Now, advisors can share clients as well. The brokerage firm has some 600 of its more than 19,000 advisors operating in some form of team model, whether that's co-locating or sharing clients, said CEO Penny Pennington, in an interview with WealthManagement.com. She expects that to reach 1,000 by the end of the year.
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones was up 137 financial advisors at the end of the second quarter compared to the second quarter of last year, bringing its total to 18,892, the company reported Friday.
^Donachie, Patrick (March 17, 2020).
"Edward Jones to End In-Person Client Meetings". Wealth Management. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones is asking its advisors to meet only virtually with new and existing clients, and is temporarily restricting client access to all of its 15,000 North American branch offices as a result of the burgeoning spread of the coronavirus in the United States, the financial services firm announced today.
There are several instances in the request where two references are placed at the end of a sentence, bundled together. These should be handled in one of three ways:
If the two references both equally verify the information in the passage, then only one should be used.
If these references were meant to verify different aspects of the same sentence or perhaps successive sentences, then they should be placed according to
WP:INTEGRITY.
In circumstances where this may have been one primary source being supplied along with a secondary source confirming the exact same claim, then the primary source may be deleted — only the secondary source need remain.
A Wikilink for the accolade "Fortune’s list of Top 100 Companies to Work For" was not included with the proposed text. Please provide this link.
Kindly submit a new edit request below this reply post which more closely aligns with these recommendations at your earliest convenience. Regards,
Spintendo03:47, 26 October 2023 (UTC)reply
This
edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.
NOTE: I’m proposing the following edits for
FleishmanHillard on behalf of
Edward Jones Investments. I’m a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. This updated edit request seeks to address the sourcing and Wikilink issues called out by @Spintendo in the previous version. Thanks again for your time and consideration.
Extended content
Infobox
Please update the following sections to reflect the most recent figures/years available:
Third sentence: Please update to read (changes in bold):
The company currently has relationships with more than 8 million clients[5] and $1.8 trillion in assets under management worldwide.[6]
Fourth sentence: Please remove the word “small” from “small business owners” as the company does not solely specialize in servicing small businesses.[7]
History
Third sentence: Please update to read as follows to account for the fact that the company also operates in metros throughout US and Canada (proposed new copy in bold):
Edward Jones’ son Edward D. “Ted” Jones was responsible for the creation of the individual branch network, which has spread across rural communities, suburbs and metro cities throughout the US[8] and Canada.[9]
Final paragraph: To bring current and move away from 2020 and 2021 figures, please update this paragraph to read as follows. (Conversely, adding this sentence to the end of the existing paragraph may also be an option, if preferred):
The company had 18,796 advisors on staff at the end of 2022.[10]
Business Model
Please add the following sentence after the current fourth sentence:
In 2022, the company launched a teaming program that allowed multiple branches to service clients, a pivot away from the company’s long-standing model of directing clients to a single branch office.[11]
Final sentence: Please revise the final sentence in this section to the following sentence to bring the figures current and remove “as of 2017”:
Edward Jones has the largest number of brokers, with 18,892[12], and branch offices, with more than 15,000, among brokerage firms in the United States. [13]
Awards and rankings
Please add the following sentence to the end of this section to provide more up to date information on the company’s inclusion in Fortune’s list of
100 Best Companies to Work For:
The company was ranked 35th[14]and 62nd[15] in 2022 and 2023, respectively.
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones' 10-Q report showed it finished the second quarter with $1.8 trillion in client assets under its care, a 14% increase compared to the end of the second quarter of 2022.
^FORM 10-K (Report).
U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. February 24, 2023. p. 30. Retrieved October 24, 2023. As of December 31, 2022, the Partnership had approximately 52,000 full-time and part-time employees and partners, including its financial advisors.
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. "Edward Jones offers flexibility and choice for our branch teams to grow our impact and create new value for the 8 million clients we currently serve and the 42 million serious, long-term individual investors we seek to serve," Don Aven, principal for branch and region development at Edward Jones, said in a statement.
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones' 10-Q report showed it finished the second quarter with $1.8 trillion in client assets under its care, a 14% increase compared to the end of the second quarter of 2022...
^"Jones Financial (Edward Jones)".
Fortune. June 5, 2023. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Founded in 1922 by its eponymous founder, the brokerage firm now counts 14,200 branches in all 50 U.S. states, unified by a company-wide training program that its advisors—who come from a range of career backgrounds, from engineering to education to banking—must complete.
^O’Hara, Clare (August 27, 2023).
"Edward Jones moves into downtown cores as it expands beyond traditional one-person locations in strip malls".
The Globe and Mail. Retrieved October 24, 2023. For the privately owned subsidiary of U.S. investment giant Edward D. Jones & Co., the shift in business strategy is a huge leap from the traditional one-person adviser storefront office that can be found in hundreds of strip malls across Canada. The Canadian headquarters are in Mississauga, more than 30 kilometres west of Toronto's downtown core.
^FORM 10-K (Report).
U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. February 24, 2023. p. 11. Retrieved October 24, 2023. The Partnership has continued executing its strategy to grow and promote branch team success during 2022, ending the year with 18,796 financial advisors in two thirds of U.S. counties and all Canadian provinces, a slight decrease from 2021.
^Britton, Diana (July 20, 2023).
"Edward Jones Moves More Advisors to Teams". Wealth Management. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones has a long history of operating under a one-advisor-per-branch model. But about a year ago, the firm said it would let advisors co-locate in the same building if they chose to. The firm has since expanded the team-based approach: Now, advisors can share clients as well. The brokerage firm has some 600 of its more than 19,000 advisors operating in some form of team model, whether that's co-locating or sharing clients, said CEO Penny Pennington, in an interview with WealthManagement.com. She expects that to reach 1,000 by the end of the year.
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones was up 137 financial advisors at the end of the second quarter compared to the second quarter of last year, bringing its total to 18,892, the company reported Friday.
^Donachie, Patrick (March 17, 2020).
"Edward Jones to End In-Person Client Meetings". Wealth Management. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones is asking its advisors to meet only virtually with new and existing clients, and is temporarily restricting client access to all of its 15,000 North American branch offices as a result of the burgeoning spread of the coronavirus in the United States, the financial services firm announced today.
Hi @
Spintendo - just wanted to see if you could please review the balance of our request and implement the changes you find agreeable? Don't mean to bug you, but just thought I'd re-flag this. Thank you!
Jon Gray (
talk)
22:20, 21 November 2023 (UTC)reply
Reply 10-DEC-2023
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.
Edit request review 10-DEC-2023
In 2022, the company launched a teaming program that allowed multiple branches to service clients, a pivot away from the company’s long-standing model of directing clients to a single branch office
Declined.[note 1]
Please revise the final sentence in this section to the following sentence to bring the figures current and remove “as of 2017”
Clarification needed.[note 2]
___________
^The information from the proposed source indicates that this change is optional. Thus the statement that this change is "a pivot away from the company’s long-standing model of directing clients to a single branch office" is incorrect, in that the joint analogy of a pivot (which rotates) doesn't cover this claim, which is more like a hinge (in that it only goes one way or the other) As this change is optional, there are likely some which will not make this change.
^This portion of the request does not contain the sentence that is to be replaced.
With regards to #2 above, both the old and the new sentences should be provided, like so:
Sample edit request
1. Please remove the third sentence from the second paragraph of the Sun section:
"The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 25 miles in length."
2. Please add the following claim as the third sentence of the second paragraph of the Sun section:
"The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 864,337 miles in length."
3. Using as the reference:
Prisha Harinath (2023). The Sun. Academic Press. p. 1.
4.Reason for change being made:
"The previously given diameter was incorrect."
After clarifying note #2 above, please place the {{
edit COI}} template so that I may update it.
With regards to the awards section, this has to do with a problematically-notable award. That award's wikipedia page has very little independent references, and in my opinion, is not-notable. My practice is to not add or update information concerning problematically-notable awards in articles. Thus, the update to that part of the edit request should probably be handled by another neutral editor. Thank you!
@
Spintendo Thanks, will open another as requested above. I'll also work back in some of the original requests that were neither approved nor declined the first time around.
Jon Gray (
talk)
20:22, 13 December 2023 (UTC)reply
Revision of Updated Edit Request
This
edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.
NOTE: I’m proposing the following edits for
FleishmanHillard on behalf of
Edward Jones Investments. I’m a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. This revised updated edit request addresses @
Spintendo:'s ask for changes to request formatting and elevates a couple previously requested edits that were neither approved nor declined during the past two rounds. Thanks again for your time and consideration.
Lead
Please change the third sentence in this section from:
“The company currently has relationships with nearly 8 million clients and $1.7 trillion in assets under management worldwide.”
To (areas to change are bolded. Sourcing included for editor reference. Feel free to leave out of edited sentence since this is in the lead.): “The company currently has relationships with more than 8 million clients[1] and $1.8 trillion in assets under management worldwide.”[2]
Rationale for requested changes: Figures that are currently used are outdated, per sourcing provided.
History
Please change the final paragraph of this section from:
“At the end of the first quarter of 2021 the company had 18,967 advisors, a decrease of a bit less than 1% since the same time in 2020 when there were 19,027 advisors. The average growth from year to year is about 6%. The decrease was mainly a consequence of the COVID-19 pandemic which reduced hiring.”
To: “The company had 18,796 advisors on staff at the end of 2022.”[3]
Rationale for requested changes: To bring current and move away from 2020 and 2021 figures. Conversely, adding the requested sentence to the end of the existing paragraph may also be an option, if preferred instead of replacing.
Business Model
Please revise the final sentence in this section from:
“As of 2017, Edward Jones had the largest number of brokers, with 16,095, and, branch offices, with 13,499, among brokerage firms in the United States.”
To: “Edward Jones has the largest number of brokers, with 18,892[4], and branch offices, with more than 15,000, among brokerage firms in the United States.”[5]
Rationale for requested changes: Aiming to make these figures accurate and remove the outdated “as of” qualifier.
References
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. "Edward Jones offers flexibility and choice for our branch teams to grow our impact and create new value for the 8 million clients we currently serve and the 42 million serious, long-term individual investors we seek to serve," Don Aven, principal for branch and region development at Edward Jones, said in a statement.
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones' 10-Q report showed it finished the second quarter with $1.8 trillion in client assets under its care, a 14% increase compared to the end of the second quarter of 2022...
^FORM 10-K (Report).
U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. February 24, 2023. p. 11. Retrieved October 24, 2023. The Partnership has continued executing its strategy to grow and promote branch team success during 2022, ending the year with 18,796 financial advisors in two thirds of U.S. counties and all Canadian provinces, a slight decrease from 2021.
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones was up 137 financial advisors at the end of the second quarter compared to the second quarter of last year, bringing its total to 18,892, the company reported Friday.
^Donachie, Patrick (March 17, 2020).
"Edward Jones to End In-Person Client Meetings". Wealth Management. Retrieved October 24, 2023. Edward Jones is asking its advisors to meet only virtually with new and existing clients, and is temporarily restricting client access to all of its 15,000 North American branch offices as a result of the burgeoning spread of the coronavirus in the United States, the financial services firm announced today.
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.
Edit request review 13-DEC-2023
The company currently has relationships with more than 8 million clients and $1.8 trillion in assets under management worldwide.
Declined.[note 1]
The company had 18,796 advisors on staff at the end of 2022.
Approved.Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the
help page).
Edward Jones has the largest number of brokers, with 18,892, and branch offices, with more than 15,000, among brokerage firms in the United States.
Clarification needed.[note 2]
___________
^The time distinctions proposed to be carried over from the older version into the newer version are not those suggested for use by Wikipedia's Manual of Style. (SeeMOS:CURRENT.)
^The proposed qualifier "among brokerage firms" is not clear. The EJ claim describes all EJ brokers in the USA. Does this mean they have more than any other firm? Also, the term "broker", does that mean only brokers, or does in include/exclude all advisors, fiduciaries, or other such employees?
This
edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.
NOTE: I’m proposing the following edits for
FleishmanHillard on behalf of
Edward Jones Investments. I’m a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. This edit request addresses additional feedback from @
Spintendo:’s last review and flags a partially completed edit from last time around that I believe was overlooked in error. Thanks for your time and consideration.
Lead
In an earlier exchange, an update to Edward Jones’ assets under management (AUM) in the infobox was changed to the correct figure of $1.8 trillion. I’d also ask that this update is made in the third sentence of the Lead section for consistency and accuracy.
From: “The company currently has relationships with nearly 8 million clients and $1.7 trillion in assets under management worldwide.”
To (area to change is bolded. Sourcing included for editor reference. Feel free to leave sourcing out of edited sentence since this is in the lead.): “The company currently has relationships with nearly 8 million clients and $1.8 trillion in assets under management worldwide.”[1]
Rationale for requested changes: AUM figure that is currently used in Lead is outdated and does not align with the correct information in the infobox.
Final sentence: In a previous exchange, @
Spintendo: raised questions about existing language (“among brokerage firms in the U.S., etc.”) To address these questions and to work toward updating outdated figures, I have a proposed change below.
From: “As of 2017, Edward Jones had the largest number of brokers, with 16,095, and, branch offices, with 13,499, among brokerage firms in the United States.”
To: “Edward Jones has 18,892 brokers on staff[2] and more than 15,000 branch offices across the United States.”[3]
Rationale for requested changes: Aiming to make these figures accurate, remove the outdated “as of” qualifier and remove potentially confusing language.
Please add the following sentence as the new final sentence of this section. (This is a revision to a previous request that seeks to address @
Spintendo:’s previous comments/questions about the use of “pivot”):
In 2022, the company launched a teaming program that allowed multiple branches to service clients. Prior to its introduction, clients were directed to a single branch office.[4]
References
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved January 11, 2024. Edward Jones' 10-Q report showed it finished the second quarter with $1.8 trillion in client assets under its care, a 14% increase compared to the end of the second quarter of 2022...
^Greenberg, Gregg (August 11, 2023).
"Edward Jones head count, assets grow in second quarter". Investment News. Retrieved January 11, 2024. Edward Jones was up 137 financial advisors at the end of the second quarter compared to the second quarter of last year, bringing its total to 18,892, the company reported Friday.
^Donachie, Patrick (March 17, 2020).
"Edward Jones to End In-Person Client Meetings". Wealth Management. Retrieved January 11, 2024. Edward Jones is asking its advisors to meet only virtually with new and existing clients, and is temporarily restricting client access to all of its 15,000 North American branch offices as a result of the burgeoning spread of the coronavirus in the United States, the financial services firm announced today.
^Britton, Diana (July 20, 2023).
"Edward Jones Moves More Advisors to Teams". Wealth Management. Retrieved January 11, 2024. Edward Jones has a long history of operating under a one-advisor-per-branch model. But about a year ago, the firm said it would let advisors co-locate in the same building if they chose to. The firm has since expanded the team-based approach: Now, advisors can share clients as well. The brokerage firm has some 600 of its more than 19,000 advisors operating in some form of team model, whether that's co-locating or sharing clients, said CEO Penny Pennington, in an interview with WealthManagement.com. She expects that to reach 1,000 by the end of the year.