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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 20:47, 12 November 2019 (UTC)
I will review this within the next few days.-- Alexandra IDV talk 20:47, 12 November 2019 (UTC)
Edea first appears in the PlayStation video game Final Fantasy VIII.- I would probably suggest being a little more specific and calling it a PlayStation role-playing video game.
Her outfit was praised by website staffs- it is clear that it's the websites' staff who wrote this, so I would probably just straight-up say it was praised by "publications including [A, B]"
There weren't too many problems here! I'll put this on hold for now~!-- Alexandra IDV talk 22:10, 14 November 2019 (UTC)