Lead: I think production info should stay together (i.e. rearrange it so that the casting info with the writing, directing credits).
Brian Craston is wikilinked twice in lead
"...investigating possible, and erroneous, domestic terrorism." How is the domestic terrorism erroneous? I assume you mean that there ultimately was no terrorism?
No need to wikilink United States, United Kingdom, and Ireland (common words)
"The episode received 0.70 million viewers..." An episode does not "receive" viewers ;)
"The episode later won an American Society of Cinematographers award for best regular series" -> "Drive" won the award for Outstanding Achievement in Cinematography – Regular Series from the
American Society of Cinematographers.
Quotation mark problems persist (" versus ')
Use consistent ref formatting (5 vs 7 for example)
Ref 7 publisher should be New York (also provide wikilink)
Unitalicize Critical Myth
I believe that's it. I'll place the review on hold for seven days (though it'd be cool if you get it done by the 28th, (b/c of the Wikicup). Thanks! Ruby2010/201301:10, 24 February 2012 (UTC)reply