Why is John Abraham billed over Abhishek in the infobox, but below him in the cast list? Better to follow one order, typically the film credits. --Kailash29792(talk)14:49, 2 June 2017 (UTC)reply
According to Chopra, "For 'Fashion', I had to put on six kilos and later had to shed chip by chip as the character progressed in the film. My body structure in 'Dostana' is more toned than in 'Fashion' as it is a completely beach film" - even if the film names have single quotes in the source, they must not be so here. You may italicise them instead. --Kailash29792(talk)08:06, 2 June 2017 (UTC)reply
"Dostana was filmed entirely in Miami" - I think only the main film was filmed entirely there, since the last para of filming states that the "Ma Da Laadla" remix video was shot in Mumbai (although I would not call it a part of the main storyline). Would it better if you say "almost entirely"? --Kailash29792(talk)08:06, 2 June 2017 (UTC)reply
The film was shot in Miami and only that promotional track was shot in the studio, which means the film was completely shot at one place.
Krish |
Talk10:19, 7 June 2017 (UTC)reply
The note "Also for her role in Fashion" appears twice. Perhaps you could write {{efn|name=Fashion|Also for her role in Fashion}} for one of the statements, then {{efn|name=Fashion}} for the other? Kailash29792(talk)08:06, 2 June 2017 (UTC)reply
"The producers teamed up with Facebook, which featured ads with each of the three lead actors urging users to form their own group" - you mean collaborated? And write the full form of ad: advertisement. --Kailash29792(talk)14:49, 2 June 2017 (UTC)reply
I've done a thorough read of the article, and feel it is very much GA-worthy (in fact,
even beyond). While I will pass this with no further questions, I feel
this book can be used to further expand the article for a potential FAC. But congratulations anyway
Krish! --Kailash29792(talk)05:43, 8 June 2017 (UTC)reply