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"Although Dominator contains the world's largest vertical loop, that loop is not the tallest roller coaster inversion in the world or even the tallest inversion on any of Kings Dominion's roller coasters."
This sentence is located in the first paragraph. This sentence also does not make sense. Could someone who knows about the Dominator's records please rewrite/reword this sentence so that it makes sense? I propose the following in the mean time:
"Although Dominator contains the world's largest vertical loop in diameter, the aforementioned loop is not the tallest roller coaster inversion in the world, as defined as track which suspends riders upside down, and is measured in distance from the inversion to the ground. The loop is also not even the tallest roller coaster loop in Kings Dominion."
Please, if you have any revisions, or you support this proposed sentence, please post below. GREATLY APPRECIATED! WingedYoshi - Talk to me! 01:06, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
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