The only issue I have is the use of certain words which should be avoided per
WP:W2W. I will place this review on hold until the issues are addressed. If nothing is done in this time, I will fail the review.
jd22292(Jalen D. Folf) (
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16:09, 13 December 2017 (UTC)reply
I have started skimming through the WtW page and seeing what words I can find- do you perhaps have at least a few specific examples that you happened to catch?? (I am not the nominator, by the way, I'm just here to help out.)
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17:51, 13 December 2017 (UTC)reply
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TheDisneyGamer: The only few I have found in particular were puffery words such as "great" and "leading" (not sure if they're used in a way that's not described in W2W), an expression of doubt in the use of "so-called", and finally the use of "notably" is not of impartial tone, as described in W2W's Editorializing section. Perhaps I might be looking at this MoS wrong, but I'll leave it up to the editors to decide.
jd22292(Jalen D. Folf) (
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17:59, 13 December 2017 (UTC)reply
Ok, I think I might've removed most of the W2W-y things?? I couldn't find "so-called" anywhere, though I might've missed it (or I removed it and don't remember doing so), but I got rid of some that I found how does such as "critically acclaimed". How does it look??
TheDisneyGamer (
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17:35, 15 December 2017 (UTC)reply
This is also for
KAMiKAZOW, who made this edit, but in the section about Ishiiruka, I notice the use of "unique," another peacock word. "So-called" is still present in the phrase "The solution that the so-calledUbershaders...". A quick Ctrl+F can help with that. See
WP:EDITORIAL about the use of "notably" in the lead where it says "most notably the ability to play games with...". That's all I can see for now.
jd22292(Jalen D. Folf) (
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17:54, 15 December 2017 (UTC)reply
Not a problem. I can now say that the Words to Watch issue has been addressed and the article is now good article status. Congratulations!
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17:23, 17 December 2017 (UTC)reply