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Hi, obviously not much wrong here, but a few quibbles
The film's cast continued to act — not sure why this isn't quite right, it reads as if it's unusual for actors to continue to act after making a film. Perhaps something based around "went on to" might give a better sense?
The image licences are complicated, but seem OK as far as I understand them. Is it possible to process
File:Ali Yugo in Djaoeh di Mata.jpg to improve the appearance? I don't know, just asking the question.
Part of it is because of the
halftoning used in the original printing process, which makes playing with the levels a pain in the butt. This image was printed right on the fold, which is what that black mark is. I could probably get rid of it later, —
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12:54, 14 July 2013 (UTC)\reply
Some of your short-form references have roman font for publications which are italicised in the "Works cited", eg Het Dagblad/Het Dagblad. Is there a logic to this?
Essentially because the coding is a pain (have to use .27.27Het Dagblad.27.27 to get it to work properly; this has not been a problem to date in FACs, although I have no issue with changing to italics here. —
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12:54, 14 July 2013 (UTC)reply