Added directing credits, guest stars to production section (everything in lead must be in main body of article); identify who Dan Butler is (who don't indicate he is a guest star in production section)
"...out of an idea from Glen Morgan's idea..." Idea...idea (redundant)
:While fake frogs were considered for the scene where they fall from the sky, the producers decided to change to real ones, dropped from a short distance, as, according to Carter, the "fake ones looked too bad and didn't hop away after command"" Should be split up into 2 sentences; or add a semicolon
"Dan Butler was terrified of the animal, being unable to talk while shooting the scene in the basement, and the make-up team not needing to apply fake sweat on the actor.[7]" Sentence needs to be rewritten
Got seeing to these when I saw the review go up. As the one who dealt with the IP, I think it's a one-off blip. I dropped a talk page note to them when it looked like it might go beyond 3RR, explaining the issue, and it hasn't occurred since. If you want to leave this a couple of days, or even the full holding week to be sure of it then that'd be understandable. It's probably what I would do.
GRAPPLEX03:50, 21 January 2012 (UTC)reply
Your changes look good. Per your recommendation, I'll keep the review on hold for a few more days to ensure there is not instability from that particular IP (or anyone else). Thanks, Ruby2010/201304:16, 21 January 2012 (UTC)reply