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Short description: Dan Flavin art museum in Bridgehampton, New York
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"The overall renovation was sympathetic" What does this mean? I think this needs to be explained better or a different word used.
"At the opening of the museum the New York Times stated that an exhibit of fire department memorabilia," The article doesn't need to say who reported about future exhibits. Instead, it can just state that these were planned at the opening.
Merge the last two paragraphs of "Dia and Dan Flavin"
"The Dan Flavin Art Institute, within Dia Bridgehampton, consists of nine works in fluorescent light, as well as one drawing, all by Dan Flavin and all on permanent display." The phrasing is awkward, especially with all the commas. Try rephrasing or splitting it up.
"Dia expresses, in the pamphlet describing the institute," Delete "pamphlet describing the institute" as it is not needed.
"In a New York Times article about the opening of the museum, it is reported the plans for this" The reader does not need to know where it was reported.
The "Temporary exhibitions" section should be broken up with level 3 headings.
No issues with earwig (high percentage is because of direct quotes)
Source check not completed yet.
When the above are addressed, I'll do another read-through and verify the sources. I made edits along the way, so feel free to revert anything that isn't helpful. I'll place this on hold in the meantime.
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