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"In 2014, De Sarthe Gallery opened an 8,000 square foot space in Caochangdi,Chaoyang District, Beijing."
"In 2017, De Sarthe Gallery opened a new space with 10,000 square foot in Wong Chuk Hang, a burgeoning art district in the south side of Hong Kong island."
The basic information about gallery locations in Beijing and Hong Kong comes from the official website of the gallery.
https://www.desarthe.com/about.html
"It participated consecutively in Art Basel Hong Kong in 2015, 2016, 2017 and 2018."
The text in your proposal is insufficiently paraphrased from the source material. Text added to the article must be phrased using your own words. Please see
WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE for more information about this requirement.
One of the links provided as a reference is non-functional and in any event, is not a
WP:RS.
Information on a gallery opening a new exhibit space is usually significant when those openings include notable pieces or exhibits being featured. In and of itself a gallery marking extra space off for future exhibits is not ideally notable, and is akin to
WP:MILL (too ordinary for inclusion).
It is not clear through the proposed text what is meant by the words participated consecutively. Please elaborate by giving added context for the reader. What type of participation is included in the Hong Kong Basel event? Does the gallery receive items during the event or does it send them out? Is the event local to the gallery itself or does it involve other gallery spaces throughout the city? Please clarify and include sources, perhaps local Hong Kong media such as newspapers, or online media from news organizations unconnected to the art-world.
Baiser1994, you still need to declare the nature of your connection to this gallery. If you receive, or expect to receive, any payment of any kind from the gallery or its owners, you are
obliged to disclose who pays you. Please see the advice I left on your talk-page
here.
This is the English-language Wikipedia, so stuff we write here needs to be in English – not just English words, but comprehensible English syntax and idiom. One possible way of rephrasing "It participated consecutively in Art Basel Hong Kong in 2015, 2016, 2017 and 2018" into idiomatic English is "Since 2015 it has been among the hundreds of galleries taking part in
Art Basel Hong Kong" – which is what our article says.