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Great work but what about Somalia specifically Puntlands Ras hafun ?!?! — Preceding unsigned comment added by ذو سواد ملكي مكروبي بنطي ( talk • contribs) 19:44, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Cyclonebiskit ( talk · contribs) 21:31, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article, comments to follow soon. ~ Cyclonebiskit ( chat) 21:31, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
At that time it was the second-strongest named cyclone on record over the Arabian Sea, behind only Gonu of 2007.– Overly specific record is overly specific. If you feel it warrants mention, I won't push to remove it, but I don't feel that specifying the subset of named storms in the NIO (which is only 11 years of storms) is worth noting.
... which induced cooler and drier air into the circulation.– Don't think "induced" is the proper word to use here, but can't think of a proper replacement at the moment
According to the JTWC, Chapala moved ashore and immediately turned back over water, although the land interaction and dry air severely diminished the thunderstorms over the center.– Wording is a bit clunky here and repeats what's already known.
The agency soon after relocated the center over land.– I don't think the JTWC controls where storms move
Elsewhere, the village of Jilah was largely destroyed by the cyclone when about 80% of the structures were flooded...– the "largely destroyed" claim is not supported by the cited source.
Overall a very comprehensive and well-written article, but as usual you neglected to improve the lede so that's where most of the issues are. Refs could probably use some cleaning up as well, but they're not really problematic enough to be an issue for GA status. Should be relatively easy to fix up so I'll place the nomination on hold for now. ~ Cyclonebiskit ( chat) 22:08, 2 March 2016 (UTC)