"She led the team with 14 goals and 34 points, including six match-winning goals" This could be much clearer. Was she the top goalscorer?, did she get the points or was it the clubs total? And do the match winning goals need mentioning?
Has she made her debut yet? If so then it should be updated.
She hasn't - she joined in October 2020, and since then Thorns haven't played a match, with the 2021 season scheduled to start in May. --
SuperJew (
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10:57, 9 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Youth national teams
Is the lengthy caption for the 2012 FIFA U-20 World Cup image nessercery?
"Dunn has competed on behalf of the United States in various national youth teams from 2008 through 2012, including at the 2008 FIFA U-17 Women's World Cup." Ref needed.
"She was in the 2010 FIFA U-20 Women's World Cup in Germany and was a member of the team that won the 2012 FIFA U-20 Women's World Cup in Japan." Ref needed here too.
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REDMAN 2019 and
Hmlarson:Y I have done a full run-through of all refs on page (including those added in Hmlarson's recent edits). All issues above should've been taken care of (but it's hard to be entirely sure, as the ref numbers changed around a bit). --
SuperJew (
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10:50, 9 March 2021 (UTC)reply
To Do
Expand lead
Expand Chelsea
Expand Thorns to note 2020 season.
Add Courage 2019 season
Add 2019 FIFA World Cup section; re-organize senior international
Add Style of Play
Expand In Popular Culture
Comments
This is quite a large review. Most of the issues are with the references, which are missing authors, dates and accessdates. They all need to be as complete as possible. I am putting this on hold until the issues have been fixed. I will be having a look at this page every couple of days but you can ping me if you have finished and want feedback and I will replay as soon as possible. Good luck!
REDMAN 2019 (
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14:46, 22 February 2021 (UTC)reply
There are still few references without accessdates. This can be fixed quite easily as you basically just need to add the current date.
Out of the 100 references, 75 have an accessdate. The other 25 are archived versions, and therefore don't need an accessdate, since the archive date functions as an accessdate too. --
SuperJew (
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13:18, 10 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Somethings wrong with refs 46, 50, and 51. I'm getting Error 503
The refs still give me a error but maybe that's just me. Apart form that everything seems to be in order and I am happy to promote this.
REDMAN 2019 (
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13:33, 11 March 2021 (UTC)reply