was a unique American seaplane fighter aircraft; What is the purpose of "unique"?
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The second para needs to be broken to sentences. Except the last sentence the entire para is presented as a single sentence using commas which in the end gives rise to difficulty in getting the flow and the meaning. Break this.
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It was created "in 1950s" as a result of "to overcome" the problems with supersonic planes taking off and landing on aircraft carriers that was experienced in the 1950s
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Section 1;
Link U.S. Navy on the first mention; not on the second
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Section 2;
"Required" power was to be "put up" by a pair of after-burning Westinghouse XJ46-WE-02 turbojets
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Section 3;
Who is E. D. "Sam" Shannon? Mention his position, if possible
Regarding copyvio (barging in as I was passing along) - it is most likely the youtube page created on Nov 16, 2007 copied from the wiki page that existed back then -
[1] - looks like an exact copy of the 2007 version, but the wiki version pre-dates the youtube entry.
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08:34, 27 April 2017 (UTC)reply