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... that Cloudwater Brew Co was once named the second-best brewery in the world by
RateBeer? Source: "Manchester brewery Cloudwater has been named the second best in the world at the RateBeer Best awards."
Manchester Evening News)
Thanks for the review. To be honest, it's not the "hookiest" of articles. If there's anything in the article you think could work I'm open to suggestions :) I've proposed an ALT1 below but it's pretty similar to the original. If it's not interesting enough then so be it, I don't mind if it doesn't go on the front page.
BigDom (
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16:45, 12 November 2020 (UTC)reply
ALT1: ... that Cloudwater Brew Co is the only UK brewery ever to be named in
RateBeer's annual Top 10 Breweries in the World list? Source: "1. Cloudwater Brew Co, Manchester... The only British brewery to feature in the top ten breweries in the world according to RateBeer[...]"
The Telegraph)
Yoninah Hi there. I'm not sure what you mean by self-promotional as I don't have anything to do with the brewery (apart from enjoying their beers occasionally) and the sources aren't self-published. However, I will propose an alternative:
"Self-promotional" doesn't refer to you, but to the beer. Maybe I should have said "self advertisement". Anyway, ALT2 reads a lot better IMO. Thanks. Pinging original reviewer
HickoryOughtShirt?4 for a review of ALT2.
Yoninah (
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12:48, 16 November 2020 (UTC)reply