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Remove the extra space in between the quotation mark and Cliché (Hush Hush) in the infobox
"with her also appearing injured on various Romanian television" --> This sentence doesn't make sense
"the singer eventually decided to take a break from her career." --> "Due to this, the singer eventually decided to take a break from her career."
"Meanwhile, Cliché (Hush Hush), her last record under Prodan's label—Maan Studio—was made available for consumption in Japan on 2 October 2013;[1]" --> This sounds like it was released as a studio album rather than a reissue of one
"three songs" --> "three new songs" (Does this sound alright to you?)
"The physical edition of Cliché (Hush Hush)" --> "The physical edition of the record"
" it peaked at number one in Bulgaria,[13] and within the top forty in Hungary,[14] Italy,[15] Japan[16] and Slovakia,[17] being eventually certified Gold by the Federation of the Italian Music Industry (FIMI) for selling 15,000 copies in Italy.[18." --> Perhaps break this up into two sentences? It's a bit long and crowded
"comparasion" --> Not a word (Did you mean "comparisons"?)
"vampire films for teenagers" --> What do you mean by this?
"A "club-friendly" electro dance recording,[23] the last single from Cliché (Hush Hush) premiered on 1 May 2013,[6] featuring the vocal collaboration of Prodan's fictional character, Manilla Maniacs.[3]" --> "A "club-friendly" electro dance recording,[23] the last single from Cliché (Hush Hush) premiered on 1 May 2013[6] and featured the vocals of Prodan's fictional character, Manilla Maniacs.[3]"
You should probably state the name of the single in the above sentence because without it, it sounds quite confusing
"The song's music video was compared to the works of Madonna, while its choreography to Michael Jackson's 1980s material.[23]" --> Note who made this comparison since there seems to be only one person who thought this
The "Credits and personnel" section should be placed below "Track listing"
"All lyrics written by Nemirschi and Prodan, unless stated.[3]" --> "All lyrics written by Andrei Nemirschi and Prodan, unless stated.[3]" (You never mentioned this Andrei Nemirschi guy until now)
Remove the title of the album before " – Standard version[1]" to remain consistent
I believe you could combine the two charts for "Release history"
References
Ref #1 – Link "iTunes Store" here and remove any other links to it elsewhere
Is it really necessary to group several citations together?
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