who were known as the leading builder of this type of vessel during this period -> known to be the leading builder of this type of vessels during this period
Captain's cabin; decapitalize "C" and also throughout the article check this issue. "Captain" must be used only when it is used a prefix for the name, for example, Captain Smith, else it just "captain"
Unfortunately I've got relatively few details about commissioning dates for Chinese ships of this period. I've got no doubt that there were commissioning ceremonies, as there was a keeness to replicate the various Western naval procedures.
Miyagawa (
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11:54, 14 January 2017 (UTC)reply
William M Lang; is to be "William M. Lang", per
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A flying squadron of Japanese vessels, flying squadron? Do mean aircraft?
I've removed flying - it doesn't really need it. I think it simply meant that it was a squadron of ships that moved and fought together within the fleet.
Miyagawa (
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11:54, 14 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Thanks for reviewing, I'll get these edits done over the weekend. But I'll get that copyvio fixed right away. It was inherited from the previous version of the article, but it's my own fault as I didn't check it.
Miyagawa (
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18:14, 13 January 2017 (UTC)reply