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Reviewer: Hog Farm ( talk · contribs) 15:22, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
Lead "oversaw the construction of Weston College" - Was Weston College independent of Boston College at this point, or just a department of BC? The wording implies a separate entity.
Infobox Is there a reason his leadership of Gonzaga College is not mentioned in the infobox along with his 3 other presidencies?
Early life and education Is there a good reason to list the names and occupations of all of his siblings? WP:NOTGENEALOGY states that we should keep genealogical material to a minimum, and unless there's a good reason for keeping, it should be reduced (although his brother becoming a priest is probably relevant, since Lyons was also ordained).
You also cited to the wrong page number for his date of birth, p. 354 of the PDF is the page that lists his death date (but not his birth date).
Boston College "Lyons believed that it was his duty to support the president during time of war" - Is this referring to President Wilson? If you, you might want to be more specific, as president has been used to refer to university presidents throughout the rest of the article.
Georgetown University - "and his presidency was considered unsuccessful." Is this from the next source cited? I can't access the Curran source, and drawn conclusions need to be covered by citations.
External links - See WP:FINDAGRAVE-EL. Find a Grave is usually not good as an external link unless it adds additional information that is not available anywhere else. Is this the case with this use of Find a Grave?
That's it for the GA review, the references and images look fine.